Tuesday, May 13, 2008

May 2008 Week 2 Results

Hi Boys and Girls,

The second weekly entries are in and have been uploaded.

A gallery has been created which you can find here.
The original files can be found here.

Becca


Frank


Steph


Vince


Vic


Keegan
Posted by Victor Choy at 8:03 AM Labels:

4 comments:

  1. JaneMay 19, 2008 at 10:43 PM

    Vic
    Interesting shot, i like the lighting in the folds of the curtains and the top to bottom gradient of light. It could have used a different angle perhaps or some cropping to focus attention more and let viewers know what you thought was poignant about the shot.

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  2. Frank LaxMay 20, 2008 at 9:10 PM

    Steph,

    Great shot. Colors are nice and vivid. Only thing I could suggest is having a bit more contrast between the blue and the black to give it that extra sharpness and punchy look.
    That is all.

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  3. FrungieMay 20, 2008 at 9:44 PM

    Frank!

    ok, so I hear you got a lot of flak for this shot. so here goes:

    the strongest part of this photo is definitely your idea, which is, I think, the most difficult part of any photo/image/design etc.

    so to strengthen your idea, I might have even zoomed further into the eye, so there is less distraction around the focal point. Or, to punch the eye out more, given more contrast to the iris. so I guess it's about finding your story (window to soul), and really communicating it as succinctly as possible. does that make sense?kw

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  4. Victor ChoyMay 21, 2008 at 8:36 PM

    vince,

    the color, lighting and exposure is great in this shot. the dark frame and stain glass contrast nicely.

    Taking frank's first lesson in mind, I would shift the photo (or crop it - woohoo frank's 2nd lesson) so it follows the rule of thirds a little closer.

    great shot, is this your church?

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